Introduction for my writing assignment.

Here's the introduction for my story due for class. It starts with a prompt, the prompt is the first sentence, we must then continue the story:


Debbie handed over her bag, her heart hammering with fear. The night was young, but surprisingly no one was

about , all but two figures standing in the darkness. Quietness roamed their surroundings, only to be disturb by the

hard breathing coming from Debbie. thoughts rambled through her mind as the thief's cold, rough hands snatched

the bag away from her. How could I let this happen she taught as the thief grinned delightfully. She had just only

arrived home from a bank withdrawal to be placed at gunpoint while exiting her vehicle. Nevertheless, there she

was presently, staring intently intently at the trigger of a gun, fear pulsing trough her very veins, her bag already

in the possession of the thief.

Not to bad. I like it so far. It makes me want to continue with the post war thread. Not for a contest or anything but with you, yorael, dumbled0re, Ascendancy, and myself, I think we could get that to turn into a great little story.

Keep up the good work!

Were you just sharing or did you want advice/help or additions to this or..?

Just sharing

Nice work Natsuda^^

It sounds great! Just the kind of clincher to get people interested.